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:: humanity ::

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:: h u m a n i t y ::

THe species of  flaWS
OUr  lives  are  ironIC
  WE live to destrOY
    WE seek monEY
        POwER
    FAme, fortuNE
  BUt  lack  the  wiLL
TO rise from couchES
ANd  actually  rise  UP
TO do something elSE
  OTher than watchTV
     IT all  takES
        EFfoRT
     STop being SO
  APathetic and laZY
ANd when you're theRE
WIth the money, powER
YOu  stop  to  care  fOR
  THe  less fortunaTE
    THose who waIL
        HUngER
    DIe on streeTS
  WHile we eat, frEE
OF the pain  & famiNE
WE fight  for  burgeRS
THey    fight    for    liFE
  WHere's your heaRT
    DOn't you seE?
        DOllAR
     ALl it takES
  TO buy one a liFE
WHat seems smaLL
TO you, can do heaPS
FOr someone in theIR
  SHoes of sufferiNG
    SO try to caRE
        PLeaSE
    PRove that yOU
  HAve a  conscienCE
HEart, mind, soul, aND
THat  you deserve  tHE
LIfe  God  has  trustED
  YOu with, to proVE
    YOurself  wiTH
        REdeEM
    EArn  the  rigHT
  TO get up each  dAY
TO wake up  to  a meAL
BReathe  the   very  aIR
YOu  take  for  grantED

:: h u m a n i t y ::
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This may take a leeetle bit of figuring out to get the position right of the text, so bear with me if it doesn't look right at first.

The words are placed in a way which is meant to resemble the DNA chain of life; to symbolize the very thing that governs human nature, and how we share the same genes as our human siblings in other countries. And stuff. Yer.

It begain as a random ranty thingy and i decided to make it pretty. TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK ...please.

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The text formatting took bleeding forever.
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wdsjac's avatar
Have I commented on this before? No idea...

Wow. wow. wow.
this is beautiful, I love the structure, I can only imagine what a pain in the ass that spacing must have been!

Great message, I agree with you exactly.